Linda
Linda
May 24, 2013

What do you call it?!

 

What do you call it
that turns your life
upside down?
That makes your heart
belong to another one,
someone who becomes your day
your star and the sun.

You know!!

 That's when you've
 millions of things to say,
but choked with words,

you would probably say none

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Country/Region: The human space

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loved

loved

11 years 11 months ago

is silence
and more silence
and only silence
then you will feel everything in silence
but you need a license

Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 11 months ago

I think you had better take more water with your drinks lol
Though it could be love or many things, had it happen to me once many years ago, one day I will shelve the memory but why throw something so precious away lol.
Remember that feeling and use it as a standard for all you meet,
Yours Ian.T

Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 10 months ago

You are so right that the world is drowning in silence, if only we could learn to talk openly to each other, this is one main reason I love my children friends they think talk, and it is pure unconditional love, as there is then, no room for any other thing,
Yours as always Ian.T