Nordic cloud
Nordic cloud
May 07, 2013

THE FIRST OF MAY +

The First of May.

Pink dawn
Blackbird
The first of May
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Newer ones:-

Pink satin
Black impresario
Spring

((Cliché's:-

Pink sky at night
Shepherd's delight
Pink sky in the morning
Shepherd's warning.

March winds and April showers.))

Lost in the colours 
Of the sky 
The blackbird's voice

In the pink mist
The blackbird's song
Spring morning

Pink mist
Midday moods
Grey rain

Pink mist
Grey rain
April

Pink mist
Grey silhouette
Autumn

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Now add yours? Ann.

Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Comments

Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 11 months ago

A test of words,

Spring dawn
a fleeting chorus
Blackbird sings

Cuckoo
Not the time
May's herald

Birds frolic
Seriously
Spring

Thank you for the smile this brought, once you start to write as you have done it becomes more clear and there are so many words I shall stop here,
Yours Ian

Nordic cloud

"Spring dawn
a fleeting chorus
Blackbird sings"

I liked this one best Ian, as the opening of Spring established the season,
the chorus that we hear all too little of as it seems to stop too soon,
and the slight melancholy of the blackbird, mourning it's passing.

Good effort Ian. Love to you from Ann.