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May 07, 2013

SEEKER

See the old man creep around
slowly through his empty house.
His slippers hardly make a sound,
he's quiet as a mouse.

He shuffles 'round from wall to wall
peering at pictures hanging there.
'Ere night is through he'll look at all
each one checked with anxious stare.

Next to come, all closets opened
clothes and contents, all, he'll search
resulting in puzzlement deepened.
By now his tired old legs lurch.

But he must check all the drawers,
not one holds what he is seeking.
Nor do any cabinet doors.
The whole house bears his anxious peeking.

At last at dawn he lies in bed
where troubled sleep claims him at last
dreams of searching fill his head.
Awake, asleep, he seeks his past.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost

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Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 11 months ago

A portrait of age that is with many lonely people as they shuffle in felt slippers toward their final sleep.
Loved the write it was quiet and at peace with its searching.
You take care, and know that we will share your shuffling..
Yours Ian.T

S

Hopefully I'll meet a less lonely end. Appreciate the visit...............stan

BlueDemon77

The authenticy that pours from this is staggering. Bravo!

Ron
BlueDemon77

S

Thank you. This was written based upon what I've seen too many times. Appreciate your taking the time to read and comment..................stan