Irony
insists on
these two things:
your tongue taming
the yellow.
I forget
what
the other is.
Apr 28, 2013
Forsythia
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Irony
insists on
these two things:
your tongue taming
the yellow.
I forget
what
the other is.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Anna
Maybe it is the smothering beauty of the green, that arrives late,
is the rest of the write ??
As short as this is, it is a large puzzle to sort out, it has a multitude of sighs..
Yours Ian.T
dear Anna
I'd be grateful if you could remember the other one :) though I loved the
ending lines very much.
Does your yellow flower symbolize the coward?
I forget too
and when I remember, I might not tell you.
Love it.
"your tongue taming the yellow"
Like how your poetry bleeds off
like that..like someone thinking aloud
away....looking into that distance..
I remember conversations
with people like this..
I talk aloud like this all the time
and it just pisses people off.
I like smart people
creative people..
realize how rare
it is
to find them...
MIssed this poem
but not really..
I found this..!
Now Anna--
You Know there are two things in poetry which are of utmost importance : a good memory and......and.......uh....what were we talking about?.............stan