Samurai snowflakes
bird song slice through frigid air
light-hearted, the moon
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poet code-talkers
running like fine race horses
speaking many tongues
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never the same leaf
blossoms, silent the cherry
everything is light
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golden calf is living
high off low economy,
rich get richer still
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there are debts to pay
Lucifer comes collecting,
what is left behind?
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Hi there
lighthearted, the moon
blossoms, silent the cherry
never the same leaf
sorry but I couldn't resist combining these lines
lighthearted, the moon
never the same leaf ---are particularly beautiful
Anna
A beautiful write, you should open this one up to be a Renga for all those that enjoy to join you,
Yours Ian.T
Hi Anna
Good to see I'm not the only one who tends to write Haiku in series lol. I like the way you switched to Senryu toward the end................stan
Ross, I love what you did! I
Ross, I love what you did! I'll have to add that to it. Good to see you again!
Ian, I'm not sure where or how to post it, I give you permission if you want to! (And thank you!)
Stan, Haiku/Senryu is like M'M's, you can't have just one. Or is that Lay's chips? Lol.
Nice to see you guys.
~Anna
Anna
Lovely to read your words again, this style will be lovely in one of Barbara's, "Eternal Renga Continues"
This is a continuous run and everyone can join in it is fun, mind you NO brownie points just for fun, Yours Ian.T