The being that is you, inside
is finally just getting, here;
the one you need
to blame is greed
not, this scapegoat in the mirror.
This shadow of your more, pensive self
allows the both of you, to have a beer;
but, too much malt
will have you both, blame, fault
on an innocent, scapegoat in the mirror.
Neither one of you, will ever learn
for reasons still, unclear;
as far as I can see
you took the wrong, journey;
when you chose, to blame that scapegoat, in the mirror.
From all of the mental junkfood
to everything that you hold, dear;
don't get too, proud
you're not at all, allowed;
your dues were paid by this scapegoat, in the mirror.
You need to gain some principals
to which you can easily, adhere;
then every version of you
can join this, elite club, too;
by being forgiven by that scapegoat, in the mirror !
Comments
Beua....
...is ths any better?
doc.
Beau's remarks reflect my frequent ones,
too much space, cedillas, decoration and commas.
However the message is strong. Accountability and self-forgiveness. Truly valuable concepts.
thanx, elf......
...have I helped, or made it, worse?
doc.
definitely better.
Maybe I should stop hassling you about the excessive commas, they seem to work for you, but I just can't see why. Perhaps my failing.
mirror haunts
narcsism
and the new digital cameras
we create now
when before we searched
this is a good poem for taking
a second look
at the real reflection we are
throwing in the view
not just our perceptions we are
seeing
I remember van gogh and his
mental condition
the many images he painted of
himself undoubtedly via mirror
external via internal
like living a myth
its just a reflection
an echo given out
Thank You
So true if you are honest with yourself
But most often we look to blame others not ourselves. It may help if we blame a mirror image
and Yet Narcism lies there....
"Kurt" Blamed the society that created him..
The Horror The horror the horror
but first he did blame others too
its just easier I guess and automatic function of our reptilian
brain...
interesting thought....
I must ask myself when I see my reflection again...