The heart is shaped
by remote shores
The lion keeps
its distant roar
A solemn vow
chased into view
As shadows walk
between and through
The heart is shaped
by remote shores
The lion keeps
its distant roar
A solemn vow
chased into view
As shadows walk
between and through
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Love it!
What is the form if you don't mind my asking.
Great stuff...
Nothing to crit. here. Glad this caught my eye. ~ Geezer
Colorado....home to many things
vision lands
and underground realm bunker worlds
pines and stone hulks
I like how you write
"The heart is shaped by remote shores"
how you take the idea of a heart
and mould it from the outside
completely opposite to the notion
that all things emerge from here
that the heart is darkness
mystery
that wavelenghts fall against
stealth heart
or heartless
the intuition
delving delving...
The Lion Keeps its distant Roar
the power
the King
quiet
not stretching the primal
expectation
that potential idling
solemn vow chased into
view
like a shadow
seeing only the caste
as shadows walk between and
through
of the many which is the reality
that to the truth
like the shell game
the probability of numbers
Great cryptic poetry
Thank You!
O.D.
primary wave
like overdose
its an amplitude of totality
and in addicts
the milligrams for death
can be measured in probablity
and at what amount
is the lethality
thirty pills
to the amount of one hundred twenty
like depths
for hulls
of below boats
Over Drive
an extra option
my vehicle had
like intelligence for some
when the load
is on board
and capacity is reached
an extra brain wave picks
up the extra..
intuition
number assimilation
music or colour
association
the land of the savante
or the genuis
seeing patterns in the near
impossible chatter of pattern
flow
distortions of thought
ideology concepts
for most its an overdose of
thought wave
my truck would just idle
and saving gas consumption
cassette in the player
above sixty five to eight miles
per
thirty five to four thousand rpm
in line six
300
creativity flows in the rigtht temporal
lobe which is a pretty far out place
they are finding
gave me epilpsey and painting sketching
ability and writing
and intuition
and a love of Poetry
Thank You!