docmaverick
docmaverick
Feb 23, 2013

My Poet Tree

What was a joy,
'twas once a toy,
a clever tool used for amusement;

was but a lark,
but then the bark,
began falling on the pavement.

Vulnerable outside,
gave a glimpse inside,
what was a bag of tricks;

other methods used,
unbalanced, and confused;
now I've much more wax than wicks.

At times amazed,
sometimes unfazed,
tree's branches bend, and relax;

the roots are deep,
but the grades more steep,
the leaves on the ground hide the tracks.

Gravity betrays,
cognitive thought decays,
branches baring from the breeze;

exposing birds,
who'll take off like words,
both, migrating towards more degrees.

That's not to say,
I owned not my "day",
many seasons yielded, plump;

my thoughts are tethered,
forever weathered,
my name carved faintly on the stump.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates

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Comments

Seren

Seren

12 years 2 months ago

Doc,

The rhythm and pace are great, I can't find fault

Nicely done

Love Jc xxx