Witness

Alas, Winters black and bitter wine
Stains the chins of Dionysus children
His gaze pales the grapes upon the vine
Their frozen faces, witness, the chorus of oblivion

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Colorado

Favorite Poets: William Blake

Comments

Didn't like wine and vine

Didn't like wine and vine rhyme but otherwise interesting concept