docmaverick
docmaverick
Feb 12, 2013

Found Out

I found out where I’m from
due to a response I made, the other day,
and you could see my past, bubble out of my eyes.

It even temporarily blinded my vision
until I finally realized,
that I was brought up to respond in that manner,

and I was led down a path to where I’m currently at,
and gone were my inhibitions, in the night
for it felt like springtime in my heart.

I had finally found out about myself
and about who I am, thanks to you,
and how you make me want to be a better man;

and I found out some other things, too;
for instance, how much I need your light rain to wash over me
because of how pure you make me feel.

You have made my life so passionate, and focused
that I found out you are the magic in my rainbow,
and your heartbeat is the sound of my thunder;

which I found out, is necessary for me to remain calm,
because the melody of your song carries me to your arms,
and allows me to lose myself inside your storm;

where I remain dry, and warm, and very grateful
that our voices can share the harmonies of your song,
allowing me to find out, that I like the me I am…..when I’m with you !

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates

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Comments

Seren

Seren

12 years 2 months ago

A wonderful poem Doc ... Exploring or not I like where your headed

I can't add anything nice to read you again

Love Jc xxx

docmaverick

...once again it appears we are the only ones "up"! I'm off for eye surgery, so you've laid my focus on the day.
Thanx, once again.....for that.
Sincerely.
doc.