sueb
sueb
Jan 26, 2013

Never-ending Story

Blossomed daffodils
gracing windowsills
bluebells bloom
lighting the gloom
fields of green
lush and serene
silver birch trees
whistling in the breeze
natures glory
never-ending story

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Ireland, IRL

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Seren

Seren

12 years 3 months ago

Natures story
never-ending glory

just another way those two lines could go nice nature poem Sue

Jayne-Chloe xxx