Geremia
Geremia
Jan 22, 2013

WHY DO SALMON SWIM UPSTREAM

WHY DO SALMON SWIM UPSTREAM

I know the touch of love
and the passion of an embrace
for I am fire
burning embers of life's desire
I don't want to feel
your sad caresses.
I don't want your voice
to speak its tears
or your embraces hold my fears..

let your heart tell me
tomorrow
and hold me close
when tomorrow never comes.

I am fire
I am passion
I know the touch of love.
don't let me see my dying
in your eyes
let me live illusion's lies.

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Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 3 months ago

Loved this piece though the title threw me, the flow of love came out, so well and I think one of your best for a while,
Yours Ian.T

F

Some behaviours are programmed. The lemmings too fling themselves over cliffs
Black widow spiders.
Nice title for it

Seren

Seren

12 years 3 months ago

I got the title and the ending of your poem ... it made me feel and thats what a good poem should do ...

nothing to be added or changed like Ian said among some of your best

love always Jayne-Chloe xxx

Geremia

because these are al part of being human and clinging to life.
Am on my way this morning for a new series of lower spinal infusions to ease the pain. I also chose to have surgery to alleviate kidney problem. The risk of going under is worth it. No surgery for PD-I wouldn't make it off the table.

love to my Jayne

loved

loved

12 years 3 months ago

for sharing ere they vanish
all the sperms they still contain
ere...
as you say
the inevitable end
amen
may still hope to meet
in heaven