A huge shadow fell over my heart
on 2013's dawn,
a few weeks ago, diagnosed
and now, an "earth angel", is gone!
She didn't live an easy life
but, joy did dance in her eyes;
I watched that joy drain quickly
as her spirit ceased it's cries.
I'll always be able to celebrate
Debi's life, and not her end;
I hold her dear in my mind's library
so, she'll forever be my friend.
In my inner heart of hearts
and in the center of my mind,
there is a place where I can go
to see her smile, and laugh; so kind.
Deb left this world all too soon
I'll miss her, as I continue my roam;
from all of life's burdens she's flying free,
now Debi, is finally home.
Comments
Doc
Though I liked the write I would have liked it more had it been spoken to Debi and not of her, it would have brought another facet to the write and more meaning. I suppose you could write two pieces one as is and another just talking to her, Just Me, Yours Ian.T
Thanx Ian....
...you're probably right. I was asked to write a poem to read as a eulogy; so that's why I opted for this method. But, you are correct; it WOULD have added another dimenention to the write!
Thanx again,
doc.
Dear Doc
I thought it was a lovely tribute for your friend I dont believe in mucking around with these types of writes I think that they are intensely private and I am loath to offer changes
I loved the ending its nice to think of us all going home
with love JC xxx
A difficult time....
...and a HUGE loss. I'm very pleased this caught your attention.
Thanx,
doc.