just about great
poets must compose
so that many continue to search
the heart of the creator at that moment
I step into the soul of my subject
to imagine how I'd feel
had I been the one in that situation
none-the less,
each one must have one’s own fibre
to brave the knife
the sword,
the curse
the slicing tongue
how can I ever be all in one
so my feelings are the outcome
of one’s peculiar situation
as at that moment
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This has a surrealist leaning
This has a surrealist leaning and is rather fascinating
with its cursive run down the page, tumbling words out
like the splashes from a romping stream through the rocks.
It can be read with so many different meanings.
Ann.
if this is what you meant ma'am I indeed should deem to be
honoured
Literature or art produced in this style.
my grateful thanks
Loved
I think this is one of the best poems I have read from you I cant find anything to fault
well done and Bravo
I reread this a couple of times it has a quality I havent seen in your work(or I may have missed)before
love JC xxx
you are my best friend
so many times
you have encouraged me
and ma'am too
so now I think
someday,
one day
I will also become like a poet like both of you
god willing Neopoets continue to read me
and help support a weakling
whose poetic sense
is just an imaginary inkling
Loved
I give credit where its due and this is a wonderful poem you should be proud of and if anyone doesnt agree they can bite my *** smiles
I am still learning to be a poet and I will still be learning until the day I die but thank you for the lovely compliment
love JC xxx
u sure are a real
poetic friend
I adore you for the guts you show
and
also I'd like that
you know so...