boltish bluish
what do you say
of bolts
where from heaven
they like missiles are fired
where on earth is it not a blue circle
the sea
the horizon
distant ocean
the Nile
the nails
all indicate the bluishness of creation
soft serene calm
also inter woven with a tinge
when we say why are you so blue..
more when I'm out of my blues
I shall compose then of varying hues
so far you reside in a circle of your own creation
searching from red and green
yellow too
anything which has a tinge
of you know now what..
abstract blown blue
Comments
this shall be
ensconced on my favourites list.
What have you done, where have you been,
your poetry splatters the screen!
And friend why are you silent
so many indirect messages sent
your poetry and works hit
hard hard hard
bang bang bang
and so very hard
at times i wonder
how they must be taking itt
hahaahah
Loved you missed my fav blue
The blues!
Charlie Parker, Mingus too,
You missed my favourite jazzy blue,
But what about the other blue?
Omitted deliberately?
Movie blue
Now I am blue... boo hoo
Hmm I've recovered from work xxx
Great poem looking at the intricacies of expressive phrase
Loved
I loved it ;)
I would tidy it up though it looks a bit messy
and thats MY pet hate lol giggle
love JC xxx
before others go and see films blue
kindly help clear the mess Serendipity
will you>>>
its not that bad really I was
its not that bad really I was going to change the middle of the second stanza but then after some thought decided I should keep my hands off it lol
love JC xxx
you will change your
mind for the better
hopefully tomorrow
than ks take your time i will appreciate it
I will have another look
I will have another look tomorrow but I can't promise you I will change my mind
Goodnight Jc xxx
i have noticed you have posted so many
one is also blue
and some one said it was sad
so i didn't read it
others shall do one by one tooo