Worries from past
sabotaging present
old memories
haunting tapestries
woven into now
wish they'd take a bow
and exit stage door
don't want them anymore
Jan 04, 2013
Weaved
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Well done back on track
Interesting that when temporarily depressed the quality of your work fell
thanks a mil x
thanks a mil x
I like this one Sue I can't
I like this one Sue I can't find anything to crit
Well done
Jc ~
thanks a mil so glad u
thanks a mil so glad u enjoyed this little one all the best cheers sueb x