Mirrored mountains gleam
Ripples erase reflections
Water moves away
Dec 29, 2012
lost in the ripples
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
A lovely haiku
with the most profound quality required of haiku
"Water moves away"
Brilliant!
thanks Jess
I appreciate it I've been writing lots of haiku I am exploring the boundaries
Cheers Jc xxx
Painted really well lovely!!
Painted really well
lovely!!
thanks Rula
Very glad you like it
Regards Jc x
hey Beau
I really appreciate your comment ... I finished another today will post it later tonight
Love Jc xxx
I am lost in the ripples with you.
Perfect image, placid, I can see, hear, smell, and feel it. Wonderful work!
Ron
Ron
Thank you so much I've been working hard on the series there are many more just not ready for posting
Thanks for the great comment makes it all worthwhile
Regards Jc xxx
Jayne
A good Haiku now here is one for you:-
Serendipity (happy accident (;-)
when all our poets dreams come true
They should write it down
Have a lovely day hey, Yours Ian.T
smiles for miles
And the answer to your haiku will be my next post in half an hour lol
Glad you liked it
Love always Jc xxx
Hi Jayne
Dang! Now you've got Me thinking about Haiku and I never can write just one lol. I liked the way you pointed out the delicacy of reflections on water..............stan
hey Stan
Really glad you enjoyed my little haiku ... I've been bothered by the Muse of late lol
Look forward to reading a haiku from you !!
Love Jc xxx
hey Stan
remember my "Haikookas"?
You can write haikus in a series, but the condition is each one must be able to stand alone.
gorgeous
gorgeous
Thanks Sue glad you liked it
Thanks Sue glad you liked it