Avoiding your eyes
they're guilting me
my inadvertent sighs
you, I pity
Whatever we had
for me, it's gone
I'm a coward
we carry on
Jan 03, 2013
Avoidance
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Dearest I wasn't sure which way to interpret
If they don't want you. plenty more fish in the sea for one as lovely as you xxxx
Or yes if you don't fancy him any more time to move on xxxxx
Which was it?
Frenchf
thanks french f for a lovely
thanks french f for a lovely review and think its a bit on both sides newly married and think i was feeling a bit down when penned we both need a kick up the ass lol have a gr8 day cheers sueb x
I'm divorced so no faith
This year my new year resolution is to gather ye rosebuds as ye may. Every precious moment needs to be made in relationships. A rude cousin of mine once said to me ;( she's been married thrice) the secret to men is "f..k them, feed them and leave them in peace"
Cynical but true?im trying it now
I thinks its my mid-life
I thinks its my mid-life crisis getting married at 44 lol that sounds like good advice oh what's wrong with me only married 6 months x
Never expect too much
Personally I would never get married again. No advantages so lead your life outside him and expect nothing. Big hugs xxxx
ah I'll give it a go ask me
ah I'll give it a go ask me again next year cheers xxxx
That s my girl
That s my girl
thanks beau think i was
thanks beau think i was feeling down that day i still love him so ill work on it glad u enjoyed the poem ill fix the their I always seem to get that wrong thanks for the advice glad u enjoyed cheers sue b x