strange dreams

I'm drifting to dream
Falling wounds opened tonight
Awake to sunshine

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda

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Comments

Interesting and economical

I must admit it means one thing or I have a dirty mind. Either way, Bravo to you :)

Ron

Lol it could mean lots of things given some thought .... Thanks for the read and comment much appreciated

Love Jc x

Hello

Nice senryu. First line might be a bit better stated but then again that might just be me lol................stan

Stan

I will give it some thought see what I can come up with thanks for the read and comment

Regards Jc x

A good picture, but those dreams I am sad that they are troubling, time to drag the sunshine into the evening time.
Suggest that some good music may rest the memory and change, the hurt felt to heart felt.
Easy to say, hard to do, but things one day will sort out their position in this realm, Yours Ian
PS:- cryptic, but I know you will understand, walk a while barefoot on the soil we are but a thought away.

Ian

I have good dreams floating round atm I will run barefoot tonight smiles ...this is hard to do on my phone lol

You have a great new year

Love always Jc xxx