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Nov 20, 2012

poets strugglers

poets strugglers

you are more than what you are

a star
born star…

in poetry the other poets
never or rarely give one

you all hearts have won
and
I still live in hope

someday some moody one

shall come by my way,
to say hello poet !

how come so long
barren you did stay

my inner feelings
for your dad
I know how one feels
when one loses one ...

I lost mine decades since…

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 5 months ago

I like this one,but of late you are leaving people clinging to a theme not embracing it, or it could be me lol.
Your title needs attention "poets strugglers" there are two plurals in there so one has to go, either "Poet Strugglers" or "Poets Struggle" not sure if
Strugglers is a correct word it can be "Struggler's".
You take care young Bard and look after you, Yours Ian.T