around her finger lies a rainbow's vow
that promised her a silvery-golden moon
still, after all the years spent, even now
around her finger lies a rainbow's vow
bestowed by one in history kept, somehow
within a telegram's curt words of doom
around her finger lies a rainbow's vow
that promised her a silvery-golden moon
and cherished in a pocketful of dreams
are golden traces back, with silver threads
the amber, for remembered loves it gleams
all cherished in a pocketful of dreams
and pearly strands with spirit stream moonbeams
to shimmer brightly over past foot-treads
all cherished in a pocketful of dreams
are golden traces back, with silver threads
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Judy
Beautiful words, the sequence lost me though, was there a purpose to the changes you made of the repetition??
The message of the word of loss, was plain to see, Yours Ian.T
thanks ian
i'm not sure where you think i have made changes to the repetition - except for the words 'and' and 'all' being interchanged in the repeating line in the second stanza - and that was merely an attempt to join the thoughts of the two stanzas
thank again
love judy
xxx