Oh, love
I know not how
The Heaven’s above
Breathe that vow
In which all life,
Sings without care
Sweetness in the
Palpitating air
When shall it rain
Down from the skies
To relieve the yearning
Of my deepest cries?
Nov 29, 2012
Love
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
I enjoyed this thanks x
I enjoyed this thanks x
Thank
you! c:
No "pun" intended....
...but, quite simply a lovely piece. it could...with work, transfer well & easily to an Ode.
It also read nicely, aloud.
Sincerely,
doc.
Thank
you very much! (: