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Dec 07, 2012

of human creativity

thou makest me feel

indispensable
maybe ,indisposable
may, what else
ingarbageable

but I'm glad many Neopoets follow you
and
the stamp of

free verse
which
is no curse

let it rest about my shoulders,
we are all trained to carry heavy boulders,

the Taj Mahal wouldn't have ever been built
unless guys like you and I
weren’t made to
under the over weights
be killed

but for a monument of that stature,
I shall once again lay
and
with the might of creative human player
happiness display,

albeit,

it may be some other day

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

Seren

Seren

12 years 4 months ago

long time no read I see your still writing your comments into poetry
nicely done as usual ;)

~JC

loved

loved

12 years 4 months ago

missed ur lovely wonderful and sexy comment
that's what makes it more soulful