Lingering Scent

I liked this, i'ts modest because it doesn't strain for effect, so it works (for me)
I'd love to see you break out into longer lines. more like
She spread her petals far and wide
which is the best line in this poem in my opinion, but even longer line, eg 12 syllables
best wishes
ross

I really liked your rhyme scheme here (and I'm not always a fan of rhyming so it's really impressive for me). I always loved the simplicity of it and how you're able to describe the woman with so few words.

I am that rose
on which poetry I compose
men love roses too
and kiss one in front of you
so that you feel a twitch on your lips...
which!
heavens what are you asking me...

then they smile at you
and bring tears too
in whose eyes?
of course yours tears
of joy
but you don't wipe them off

then they prick and a drop of blood oozes ..
whose
yours of course
on the seemingly virginous night
yes
that's the insinuation right ...

so he bows and vows
with a red rose in hand
will you be mine
and so on...
have a good time
before you to a man's infatuation give in
your whimsical mind
he will move to another
soon find

Just going through poems and found this one ... I love the theme but the rhyme for me felt forced .. maybe you could lengthen some lines to give it a better rhythm

I did like the theme but I just felt a little more work would make this one sing

sincerely Jayne-Chloe