Geremia
Geremia
Nov 25, 2012

MELANCHOLY BLUE--Updated

MELANCHOLY BLUE

All that has died in me
lives in memory’s keep
shadows deep
melancholy blue

in a crcle never-ending
relentless and unforgiving
I am taken back back
to wounds ever bleeding

Who I am today
will die to tomorrow
and when the world I know
begins to fade a way
I sink
into shadows deep
melancholy blue.......

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Geezer

Geezer

12 years 5 months ago

to say the least. It takes me around and around. ~ Gee

Geremia

Yes. Melancholy is a circle difficult to break, like some in Dante's INFERNO are swept away in a never ending circle of eternal fornication as punishment for some carnal sin. :)

Ross Hamilton Hill

Ross Hamilton Hill

12 years 5 months ago

this seems more a song than a poem

shadows deep
memory’s keep
melancholy blue.

thats the chorus..