Hope is gone,
Dreams are dead,
Angry words were the last said,
You slammed your door,
You sped away,
My heart swore to me you’d stay,
It was just a fight,
We both had lied,
But I let it touch my foolish pride,
You wanted to forget it,
To just move on,
God I wish I had now that you’re gone,
Tears stream down my face,
As I cry your name,
I didn’t realize I could feel this much shame,
I talk to your stone,
I feel the pain,
Lightning flashes and thunder rumbles,
Here comes the rain.
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Sir z....
...l applaud this effort !
doc.
As one...
who loves rhyme, I think that this one has a lot of merit. Look at your meter a little closer and try to eliminate the stutters. Nothing that can't be fixed. Nice job, ~ Geezer