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loved
Nov 17, 2012

the last of me

old,
which is gold
never mind still I will appear
as yesterday there would have been a tear
when I fell almost to finality
ere fatality
my deafness and the road least taken
were at fault,
as I took the tunnel of darkness
to avoid wrath
there was then the calamity
I wanted you to know
wow, fell flat in the darkness
no one knows,
yet in pain with broken arms
a shattered shin
and a twisted knee
all the pain got better of me,
as fatality
relatives all turned docs to salvage
ere the end!
but I am sure you are glad too to see
my flash across your page once again,
how happy now are you?
Or are you?

I survived that you can see
but my memory
took away my expertise
of writing poetry
extemporary!!!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

S

Perhaps we should form a local chapter of THE SOCIETY FOR THE SICK LAME AND LAZY. Hope your recovery is going well.........stan

Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 5 months ago

Just a temporary Break you had.
Just reminded me of when in Africa I went to a local Restaurant to have an evening meal, it was all OK when I parked the car then I turned the lights out switched all off and locked car, off I went to go straight to the Restaurant.
Forgot the kerb stones they had there to separate the parking spots, and went ass over head tore trousers and a shirt and was bleeding a bit, spent the next half hour cleaning myself up in the toilet of the food place, then I went home without eating, LOL It's not Funny...
Liked this journey into pain,
I am glad that the Bard,
is fully functional again,
Yours Ian.T

loved

but glad
in my case not a drop of blood was shed
not an iota of hair lost .... coz i am already bald
no pants parted
but then who knows
the internal bleeding twas
or twas not
till a week later
watch
says a real doc///>>>

loved

loved

12 years 5 months ago

THE SOCIETY FOR THE SICK ...LAME... AND LAZY.

will be inaugurated at midnight
wherevever one is tonite
by
our one and only
SCRIBBLER

all are welcome to join as volunteers

Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 5 months ago

I would love to join but am too sick, lame, and lazy, mainly Lazy lol,
Yours Ian.T

S

Sounds like you'd be a good candidate for the procastrinators club if I ever get around to forming it.........stan