Seren
Seren
Nov 11, 2012

lilac moons from a master

As Infinitesimal leaves
plucked by a great seer
it started,

half-light birthed
and a lilac moon erupted,
from a crown of pine

all this,
concealing
a master at work

I observed,
invisible hands
slowly smear the canvas,
Water Lilies now splash
in my pastel sky,
astonished

existing for eons,
since waters lapped
at Uluru,
since hanging rock
was submerged
never knowing a glory
of impression,
wedges of oceans had
separated

now,
lifetimes later,
Monet
paints the sky
in my awe

as bat wings spread
moving life,
through nights grandeur

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda

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Comments

Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 5 months ago

A reflection of Monet to remind you of the same sky that watched over the two great Islands that joined to make your Country and putting Uluru in the middle, a great write as usual.
Take care out there, Yours Ian.T

Seren

Seren

12 years 5 months ago

Very glad to know you enjoyed this one
It's one of my favourites the lilac moon
was in our night sky so very real and
Beautiful I hope I did it justice

Love always JC xxx

weirdelf

but Monet? Give me a break!
Monet's use of light doesn't fit Australian light except perhaps ... well I can't think where, none of Australian light or landscape bears any resemblance to Monet's vision.

Seren

Seren

12 years 5 months ago

Smile I saw what I saw the colours were magnificent ... Anyhow its just a silly poem not finished maybe Monet can be substituted for a Aussie artist ... It's a good point I can see what you meen ... I'm open to suggestions

Cheers JC