About chariots and other things re-write

but
'It’s going so quickly now' just grated a little to my ear
can i suggest another word or phrase to convey this?
something like - 'it's progressing in compelling haste'...

and
'I wonder how
I will get through on my own
tomorrow….' -do you think you need 'on my own'?

an emotive write
love judy
xxx

Time is stealing my days

time is the only element which is neutral
but the circumstances
the environment
take their toll
some take blood
others spirit of young and old…
time severs as it does not know
from Esker to Judy or Loved maybe
time is a loner
a healer
for it has no brother, nor sister
in anyone one of us
that alone is true

time moves on without remorse
sound or music,
it leaves behind
only everlasting memories….

I felt sad when I had read the poem,
but had a moment of contrast and would LOVE to see your steed,
my mind conjures up all manner of fantasies, and they make me laugh.

And then as a poem, as usual you put it so clearly,
and at the same time well.

Love Anni

No one is who they were or think they are.

Is that a good or a bad thing? Depends, doesn't it?

My best two all.

~Anna