I love to read you
Dear Esker...
twill be a pleasure to meet you
when I come to Ottawa….
but then
I wouldn't like to risk my anonymity
Oh! what a pity
I can never meet ye
in all sincerity
but shall find a way
if wills divinity
Oct 20, 2012
meeting in Ottawa
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Loved
Why did the chicken cross the road???
To meet her/his friend on the other side.
Look, I is no chicken but to meet Esker.
Well there are many that would love to.
Could you imagine the trade off there.
The two types of poet just talking..
Now come on would Esker ever meet you again???
I am sure he would never talk of anything later..
Give yourself a break and step out of that shell,
Yours, Sparrow.......
sadly
a negative remark from you I shun Ian..
I always see to the glass being full
when it may be empty as per you
but its still full
till broken
as it has air full
Esker may or mayn't meet me never mind
BUT I will
Loved
How say you a negative remark,
You would benefit by a meeting with Esker.
I would love to be able to sit with him and learn of his ways.
His spirituality to me seems from the olden days.
You worry about being hidden, don't you know young Bard, that though we don't know you, through your words we know of you, and many of us not only here on Neo, seem to accept you as you are, and in that they like the person you are.
It is late and I have to sleep so will bid you good night and you take care of your ways, Yours Ian.T