roses fade
yes...
but they never die...
they live in books
till end of time
and
help recall the moments
since lapsed,
instantly
Aug 12, 2012
of roses
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
i really like the first part of this loved
but i would lose the last lines
'as hands clap
they come alive in memory....
wow
how voluntarily'
- finish the write at 'instantly'
just me :)
love judy
xxx
Thanks Judy
since accomplished
Loved
Just the odd flower here in laminate but the old bible use to hold a few.
Good advise from Judy and a grand write,
Yours Ian.T
u 22222222222222222
r d two roses for me
as u help spread my perfume
across the internet
thanks Judy and Ian
Judy always gives good advice
i also advise
you follow her 22222222
of rose
'''''''Of rose
roses fade
yes...
but they never die...
they live in books
till end of time
and
help recall the moments
since lapsed,
instantly…
GOOD ONE
GOOD ONE
thanks
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