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Apr 17, 2012

Dreams

The minds manifest has so many weights
one such corner has the best enclave
to reminisce for the events gone by
yet imagine ones ahead
in the creation of one’s mind
bold, stout and fervent
the dreams one gets are heaven sent,
if there be one
otherwise dreams are the seeds of rejuvenation
a man can only create and procreate
with visual injection
of thoughts deeds and action
which manifest from sheer virtual imagination
the impossible is a deterrent,
the positivity is cornered
in the dreams manifests,
hence we explore
to the far folds of unknown destinations
without dreams life would be naught
mere virtual imagination

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Eduardo Cruz

For me this is one of your best, coherent, fasinating and well constructed.
Bravo to you, I think that you have been listening and reading. I am impressed.

Eddie
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Candlewitch

I beleive this is one of your best poems to date! It knocked me right outta my socks!!!

a man can only create and procreate
with visual injection
of thoughts deeds and action
which manifest from sheer imagination
the impossible is a deterrent,
the positivity is cornered
in the dreams manifests,

always, Cat

loved

how I can write best poetry
without any substantial knowledge

then I feel as beauty lies
in the eyes of a beholder

twas similar perhaps beauty poetic

must lie in the minds eye
of poets like you.

thank you Cat
you are graceful

weirdelf

You make me wait, you bugger!
This is intelligent, thoughtful and beautifully written.

One tiny suggestion-
sheer virtual imagination
mere virtual imagination

The slight change of meaning would enhance the difference between random dreaming and active creativity implied in the poem.

Roscoe Lane

Nice poem but what about nightmares are they not also dreams LOL, Sorry just having fun. Regards Roscoe..

loved

an aspect which slipped my sight ,
as i drop dead ,
at the drop of a hat ,
when tired flat ....
so night mares
I DON'T SEE
but in dreams
they can monster anyone
including me....
next dream i shall concentrate
at Roscoe's link
and update...