another ditch
another pitch
another screaming bitch....
maybe that's what one sees
when one is in the gory of it all,
some pain
some sorrow
but clap the multitudes all
a bout perhaps of joy
and
happiness for the boxer’s collection
ends in matchlessness
that’s what all wrestling is about
another money making
stitch perhaps
after all.
Aug 13, 2012
Brevity and poetry.... modernisation......
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
We all,
We all wrestle with our poetry, and our conscience. No one is matchless in poetry, there's alway another battle, even if it's only in the mind. Nice poem .Regards Roscoe.
thank you for the nicety
its such a pleasure to see .....
an encouraging remark ,
once one opens up to read
ones poetry