HOWLING in 2012
(dedicated to Allen Ginsberg's Howl)
I saw the best minds of my generation destroyed by money, striving,
hysterically faked dragging themselves through fascist streets to
pawn their soul for the elusive buck
angelheaded hipsters losing the ancient heavenly connection
to the starry dynamo for the the machinery
of might.
Whose poverty and tatters are deep inside
Vats and cups smoking in sterile fluorescent whiteness
and jacuzzied condos beathing frost as they chop empathy
contemplating cash.
who numbed their brains with heaven, building a hell
and saw Trumps and Turners, angling, swaggering, and
on tenement roofs regurgitated.
who passed through the universities with good grades
and fool eyes hallucinating nothing but corporate strategy
among the tears of the poor
who excelled in the academies forclosings and rubbish
obscene modes etched on the windows of the skull
Who towered in cleanshaven classrooms in evening wear
turning their rooms into chaste caskets and listening to tickertape
down the hall.
Who, untrusted with their Lucite spears came burning down Manhattan
with a pelt of bloody scalps from Wall Street.
Who spit fire in dream boardrooms, dream Martini’s at 30 Rock,
took breath or purgatoried the competition night after night. With
screams, Persian rugs, with power stares, blackberries and Pads
Incomparable blind greed in dark roiling clouds, biting at the mind
sowing stains with a smooth sailing drift of spray from the drones.
It soaks, softens, building grey From black and white,
although it illuminates the slime of the machine.
Coyote solidities of walls, backdoor greenbacks forming fearful spawn,
spine drunken-ness over their caring
Storefront horrors of three piece, pin-stripe, patent leather traffic fright…
….fork and spoon unseen undulation among the roaring winter dusks
of Harlem.
Iron-fist rantings down two points, grinding light of time
Comments
I howl...
in anguish along side of you at the religion of accumilation. It seems that the acquistion of wealth has taken precedence over compassion for one's fellow man. I am not much of one for freeform works, but I can and do appreciate them on occasion. You did in fact, meet at least 80% of Ginsburg's structual form. The topic was relevant to today's news and I applaude your images. ~ Geezer
Thanks Geezer!
I appreciate it, I'll probably work on it until it's perfect.
Ron
Blue Demon77
A profoundly good tribute.
As an exercise you have achieved a great deal.
But.
I am going to hunt you down and kill you.
Nobody, but nobody fucks with the poem that touches and effects me in every poetic way.
Be warned.
It's still there!
Hi Jess,
Nothing I could do is going to take away the impact of Howl, as if I'd want to. It's a tribute and a hell of a challenge, one that I've yet to perfect. I don't think I, in fact, touched it.
Ron
it really is a very good tribute
and an excellent stylistic exercise. As well as a worthy statement in its own right.
Of course you didn't taint or diminish the original, you would know because you would already be dead [evil laugh]
HAHA Thanks Jess!
I don't know what I was afraid of the most, being killed by you, or being haunted by Ginsberg..hehe. Thanks much. I revere Ginsberg. I've read every poem he's ever published. I do have to admit a love for Howl and Kaddish above say Plutonium Ode, but I own the collected and a gang of City Lights chaps. I have to say you have great taste in poets....hehe. Glad you enjoyed my little attempt at tribute. There are two great films about Ginsberg, one is called "HOWL" starring James Franco and the other is a documentary of his own life, with Burroughs, Ginsberg, Kerouac, even some footage of Neil Cassady. Check them out if you get a chance.
Ron
Ron
It is very difficult to emulate any person that has such a following
as Allen Ginsberg
That the write was attributed to the 1950's and the sequence of things that happened then.
I think that any piece written today, belongs to this century and that the great write with all it's leanings and reason, should be honoured for it's 1950's reality.
I have tried to find a copy of his original on www but need the book to even equate if your piece is a good comparison.
I now have to follow what others, that have read his book, have to say, and they seem to think that it's near OK or you would have been hunted down, lol. Gee and Jess seem to think you have given a good rant at the 2012 edition., but I am still of the opinion that this piece is really good for this time, Yours Ian.T
But is it Poetry ???
Hi Ian!
Yes, very much so. Listen to those rhythms. The beat poets wished to incorporate the rhythms of jazz to their work and I think succeeded. Of course, each person is welcome to have their own opinions, but Ginsberg and his style is high art to me.
Ron