A spark igites
and the rest is history.
That lone, single spark
is responsible for it, all!
The laughter, tears, and anger,
depression, giddiness, and regret;
all were each but, a single live-wire.
Once lit, ther is no turning back!
However, it's the moment that decides
which avenue shall encompass
where the fire shall burn,
and exactly who should be holding the flame!
Comments
Thanx, Mark....
...good to hear from you.
doc.
love the title
'were the fire shall burn' - do you mean 'where' doc?
just in my opinion - i think this would work better in quatrains - thoughts seem a little scattered with the couplets....
and
'were each but, a single live-wire' - (again imho) would work better with 'are' instead of 'were'
i really like the concept here doc
'it's the moment that decides
which avenue shall encompass
.... were the fire shall burn,
and exactly who should hold the flame'
- has me thinking
love judy
xxx
Doc
A moment held in the Now but of yesterday and tomorrow, great write there Doc,
Yours Ian.T