judyanne

Jul 16, 2012

forgive me

when he was called back Home I hated You
for stealing such a treasure from my world
I screamed at You and begged it be untrue
anathema I, to the heavens, hurled

ashamed, I ask now that You will forgive
my petty, childish, human ignorance
in questioning the reason, Your own motive
in making me abide within his absence

for since assured acceptance has begun
I fully understand I should not whine
because deep down I know he was Your son
long before he ever came as mine
.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many

Comments

What a wonderful way Judyanne

What a wonderful way Judyanne to reconcile with an immense loss of flesh n blood...

for since assured acceptance has begun
I fully understand I should not whine
because deep down I know he was Your son
long before he ever came as mine

hello raj!!

lovely to see you... thank you so much for the great comment
love judy
xxx

Stunning,

Stunning piece of poetry, i love the simplicity in which you've said so much. Love Roscoe...

thank you roscoe

for the very supportive comment
love judy
xxx

Hi Judy

Time Does heal doesn't it?..............stan

yes stan

once one realises that there are two other certainties along with death and taxes
- now and change....
love judy
xxx

I should not whine

after they all told me
not to whine
this whining is catching on like
pneu -what -monia

glad raj also joins in

Too much impressive!!

Almost brought tears into my eyes .Can't say more!!

...there's nothing to crit.

...there's nothing to crit..its something close at heart..and i like it.. ;)

thank you arja

for the visit and the very supportive comment
love judy
xxx

That you can scream at the returning home of one so dear and write about it is a beautiful thing.
That tears form is a show indeed of the things you have had to accept of this life, Beautifully written by a beautiful Spirit, for a beautiful Spirit,
Yours Ian

thank you ian

for the very lovely words
love judy
xxx