dittos
I’m going to
ditto you,
why you know,
as your critiques do glow
upon warm hearths of hearts
some brightness does blow
into kaleidoscopic rainbows
Oh! what the hell does Loved spell,
a link between those who know
with those who don't
well who are those?
a few Neo's think alike
they strike
as all are poetic legends
may be of tomorrows
Comments
Loved
Look at you
Overly introspective again
Venturing into fresh fields
Ever vigilant about critique
Ditto ditto Ditto.
Ok your piece was fine I was just being a bad fellow again lol.
This is just a bit of fun, lol, I have locked Yenti, and Ian.T, in a dark room so I can play,
Yours Sparrow
There in the shadows grew a monster
It ate at my own shadow piece by piece
I heard myself scream leave me alone
There was no one to hear my lonely cry
What could I do?, as I blended with the dark
Nothing cried the shadows there is nothing
I am of the nothing you believe in hear me.
You believe in nothing, there you shall remain
Is there but a creature that can help my plight?
Too late the darkness laughed, you belong to me
Did you think that your reason could let you go?
Now dwell in this darkened place till rebirth
Ian.T He He He
nice one
simple talk
ditto
Loved
I shall write a proper Acrostic on loved when time permits.
Yesterdays it was Sparrow that locked us in,
Yours Ian.T and the other two
It will be my pleasure Ian
now at least u read me
and i read u
then there will be in Neopoets
left only we two..LOLOLOLOLOL
I ..A...N...
Indispensable, the one and only one
Automated poet of Neo
Nuances of all kinds of poetry he alone knows
acrostic I composed for decades....
till some one told me
what I had accomplished
I did not then know it
see ignorance is
BLISS