Spagetti, Spagetti
the best meal of all ,
with big meat balls,
and noodles so tall,
tomato sauce,
pepper and salt,
then i dropped my plate,
oops! my fault!
Jul 13, 2012
My Momma's Spagetti
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I made this up in 7th grade as an last minute project in language arts. Its retarded and silly, i know. But my teacher really enjoyed it for some insane reason. Now i'm in high school and sometimes i catch myself singing the poem...i guess its catchy.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Dreamer
Firstly welcome to Neopoet site and I hope all will look after you here.
It can be hard sometimes, my Grand Daughter has written on this site and there are workshops on going so ask for help with one of the poets that run the workshops they should be able to give you the best there is.
Lovely little ditty there, I hope to see more of your work as soon as, Yours Ian.T
Welcome all Dreamers
It's good to be retarded and silly, in Australia we a have a saying "dags have more fun".
I do, however, look forward to seeing what else you can do,
ditto - what jess said
welcome to neopoet
love judy
xxx
Welcome Dreamer
Hope you are good at cooking same as poetry..lol
enjoyed it ..Welcome to Neopoet.
I thought...
of a time long ago, when I had this very experience.
Sometimes we just don't know when anything might be something.
Welcome to Neo. As Ian says; there are many here who will help and encourage you.
Please take advantage of all the fine poets here to advance your goals.
Looking forward to seeing more. ~ Geezer