Without absorbing too much time
I've a mindset way, too stuck;
I've seen reality bite much, harder
than it's second cousin, "luck".
I've seen pagans stop, and pause to pray
wishing the day was gone, and done;
myself, I'd merely float high in the sky
where I'd burn forever, in your "sun".
Plus, I wouldn't have it any other way
it's all good, it just plain, must be;
for, I'd spend forever and a day
if you'd please save the last dance, for me.
I'm but a slave to my emotions
though, for this life I'd never crave;
were it not for how I feel about you
I'd have no trouble, trying to behave!
So, when this "gig" is finally, over
and we disperse, independantly;
you're heart will see my right hand out
so, save that last dance....for me!
Comments
Hey!
I should say i loved this poem. It kept bouncing off from beginning to end, with just a few hitches, but I'm sure the others can help iron stuff out.
I thought a little typo got through there: Independently.
A great short poem. But can you help me out with the title? I'm having a bit of a difficulty relating it to the poem.
Thanks.
Thanx, Sir William....
...about my title; it has to do with, asking one to dance with you, or shaking one's hand....you're always at an "arm's length"...from the individual. Ya know?
At any rate, I greatly appreciate your taking the time to both read, AND commenting. Thanx, soo very much.
Sincerely,
docmaverick.
Thanks
for helping out with that *raises hat to you*
You, Sir William...
...are indeed, quite welcome.
doc.