Brilliant,blazing, softly crimson
aglow against the midnight blue horizon
Fingers strong and gentle dipping into the glory
of the melting twilight sun
Slowly streaking the reddish hue
across the complexion of the evening sky
What wonderment to the eye
The Ultimate Artist, proving He still can
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hi linda
i really like this
great personification
i just love
'Fingers strong and gentle dipping into the glory
of the melting twilight sun
... Slowly streaking the reddish hue
Across the complexion of the evening sky'
- wonderful visuals
just for reading and aesthetic purposes i would de-capitalise 'aglow' and 'across'
love judy
Judyanne
Thank you for your kind comments. I saw that red sunset for real last night. I think it was the prettiest I have ever seen
L:inda
Linda
A beautiful picture painted in words and beautifully done,
Yours Ian.T
Hi, Ian
thank you for reading and for the comments., You are always appreciated.
Linda