crypticbard
Dec 08, 2010

poetic succession

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There is always a poem after this one;
the understudy to today's centre stage:

This poem however, is never unimportant,
it is as individual as the poem that follows;
many written poems have unwritten forbears-
each poem is breathed and lived; rarely spoken.

The panorama of this poem is found in one place –
the window of its reader's imagination;
so each poem is the beginning point
of new journeys that we join with the poet.

Another poem is birthing at the end of this one;
there may be several, in fact, awaiting their turn.

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About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: AUS

Favorite Poets: There is nothing quite as boring as a life completely devoid of shadows.

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Comments

mand

mand

14 years 4 months ago

I like the way your mind works! You are a deep thinker.

I enjoyed the progression of thought and logic.

Well done

Love Mand xxxxxxxxx

C

You are most appreciated. And yes, I have experienced moments of lucidity. Else I am probably a garden variety poet. Thanks again for your kind words. CB

K

Poems are windows of our perception, obsession and complexion, eh, crypticbard?

One right after the other as long as our muse is being used. Thank God for the variety garden of poets. Every one a flower of distinction.

I like your signature line.

~A

S

lines 5 and 6 are stand outs in an already good write on writing.............scribbler

loved

loved

14 years 4 months ago

and I love to

procreate much more

as quintuplicates

in poems
birthing
I LOVE TO
CONJURE

loved

loved

14 years 4 months ago

ur so happy good frnd ur