lonely dreams tanka

My friend, yellow lined
Made my lonely dreams come true
Gold collections grew
Images in my minds eye
Gems etched in italic print

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins

a lovely tanka.
No crit. Although I hate poems in italics, the metaphor works.

I like seeing words in italics it has a softness to it. like you mentioned the metaphor work well. Glad you like it