SUBJECT MATTER

SUBJECT MATTER
You are a shadow now
simply subject of my art
lingering behind
some lines of poetry
but there are times
when suddenly
the ghost of you
stands in front of me
and my heart sinks
again

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

Comments

I've been too busy of late

and missed quite a bit of what you've posted. I'm sorry. For me mostly, but it's good to know you're still about. wesley

Thanks. Wes. That was very

Thanks. Wes. That was very kind of you. Not to worry though.

Joe

Let me......

just say; that one can never feel the hurt of another, but everyone that has ever lost someone they care about,might see themselves in this poem. It made me feel. ~ Gee

Thanks, my friend. The heart s broken a hundred times or more in one lifetime, still it goes on beating.To love someone deeply opens us to the risk of being hurt. But, then again, this is one affliction that doesn't kill us.
:) Joe

The heart beats, a million million times

a heart can never break,
its the break -down
elsewhere

in the electronic system of the mind that fails
the heart and mind
are totally independent,
only ones mind derails.

The heart has a life of its

The heart has a life of its own and has its reasons that Reason will never understand

Excellent views yours

take care,
we love your vision,
which is exclusive

One of the nicest compliments

One of the nicest compliments ,And I thank you.

I have only learnt one thing from my peers including you and

Esker and Ian and of course Lady Shirley...now not much on Neo...

'''''APPRECIATE ........................

the wisdom of the ones
who say
what they say
for they do so say
as they have done some homework
yet we may

AND i say never
RIDICULE

Love human beings like a dog ,
if you haven't seen one
GOOGLE
the latest return of a soldier from war ,
no one welcomed him more,
than his own dog
not even his gf /wife..

You need to post this my

You need to post this my friend/ So well said.

joe