Song of Anger

I have aged
For so long
In the cage
Of self rage

Life like hell
Anger eats me
Hard to tell
Friend from foe.

In my eyes
Rolling like dice
Any side faced
Life is woe
Head to toe

Anger without choice
Has made me
Mad at everything
Raged at anything
Calmed by nothing

Can’t help it
The growling anger
Worst of all
Angry at myself

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Volta / GH, GHA

Favorite Poets: Kofi Awoonor

Comments

beautiful rhythm

Sums up my anger when trying to socialize with the wrong people. Lol
Except I release the beast on the one taunting me as I cower in a corner.
Welcome to Neopoet enjoyed your poem

Hello Barbara

Thank you very much for the read and your kind words. I appreciate it.
And thank you for welcoming me into neopoet. glad to be a part.
respects.

WonderGolly :)

Hello Barbara

Thank you very much for the read and your kind words. I appreciate it.
And thank you for welcoming me into neopoet. glad to be a part.
respects.

WonderGolly :)