Eduardo Cruz
Eduardo Cruz
Feb 07, 2012

Love dressed in Anger

Death has come
And it isn't
By knife or gun

Dragged burned
And stabbed
What have I learned

Not bandage,
Injection or elixir
Can cure loves vestige

Anger is bound
To this hollow space
Where the heart isn't found

Love lingers
In a empty vessel
Feeling deaths fingers

Far down without light
Squeezing every ounce
Left of loves fight

Twinkling far above
Is a place of hope
Flying high as a dove

Hard to reach
When anger is strong
On the river Styx beach

How to exact my escape
From the dark far down
On angers cape

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I am so tired of writing of the good side of love, I decided to write of the side of love that break a heart and brings on blinding anger.

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: New York City, N.Y. Spanish Harlem, USA

Favorite Poets: P. Neruda

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Comments

Candlewitch

"Love dressed In Anger" !!! What a scary and alarming thought! What dark ideas that brings to the reader! Great title!

Anger is bound
To this hollow space
Where the heart isn't found

Love lingers
In a empty vessel
Feeling deaths fingers

very intriguing lines indeed!

always, Cat

Eduardo Cruz

that was the idea to look at the darkside of when love is taken away.
You are to kind and generous and I always appreciate your visits.

Eddie