But I am told,
I can't comment on workshop poetry,
hence I read slyly…
But now it’s clarified
I can comment easily.
But your Everyman
includes everyman and woman
Hopefully!
When I passed by a garden in Montreal,
I observed a beggar
sleeping on a bench...
Torn shabby dirty apparel
but his inner showed,
as if he had just purchased it
or picked up one ...
He was an
Every –sort –of man
Like just any one…
Comments
Loved
Loved way of talking to us again, the vision of the piece after the first Stanza was really good, but keep up the protests LOL
The man on the bench can we hear more of him, last time you spoke it was from Haiti now come on settle down it's damn cold out there, Yours Ian.T
Globe Trotting
one can see more inner's than outers
OF EVERY MAN ,
Nay, woe of a man
say woman
Not true. You can comment on workshop poetry,
It is open to the Stream.
You are just asked to read the syllabus of the workshop to understand the context.
Some workshops specifically ask members to ignore content to learn technique, others ask them to post rough drafts to show development.
You can read can't you? Try it. Your self-confessed rate of one good poem per 150 (Transformation vs Transmigration) would certainly be improved just by reading good poetry.
PLease Clarify to avoid a clash again ,Stan
Whom to follow ???
the admin
or
THE FOUNDER
KINDLY READ THE BLAST AGAIN..
I should have divided my comments
In the first part I was speaking as Director of Workshops.
In the second part about reading poetry, it was just a sound opinion
Apologies for any confusion.
Thanks a lot
I do take care
not to offer ,
as you say
Hardly any worth while ,
in any case.
Have a good day..