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Jan 28, 2012

TWO TOILETS

Two toilets guard a driveway's start
and both of them filled up with dirt
so odd they gave me a mild start
And then I grinned so wide it hurt
on seeing flowers start to sprout

Then I nearly wet my pants
When Susan took time to explain
what I beheld were"potted" plants
I laughed so hard it hurt my brain!
and now I guess that I'll sign out

serious poem from serious poet lmao........stan

About This Poem

Last Few Words: another not ready for prime time poem lol

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost

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infinite_dwarf

Well I thought it was 1.) Hilarious and 2.) a good idea. Expensive idea, but good nonetheless.