Can death come
Without a grave
Does love out last
Time and space
What of spirit
Can it hover
To enter inside
Another empty place
Will an emotion
Begin to fade
When not stroked
By loves embrace
Can you give
What's not wanted
In a box
Wrapped with lace
Who can say
Where the heart
Might indeed go
To find grace
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Dear Eddie,
A suggestion:
Does love (out) last
Time and space
A pensive write. Well thought out. My favorite lines:
Who can say
Where the heart
Might indeed go
To find grace
(I would add the word saving to grace)
always, Cat
Cat,
I didn't understand your suggestion to Eddie. It looked to me like you were suggesting the same thing. What did I miss?
And Eddie, this is a neat, concise little work. wesley
Wes
Thanks for the read and comment.
Eddie
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Cat,
thanks for the read, and the help on the "out". the grace does not mean any spiritual or Godly entity it refers to comportment. sometimes when we're in love we become idiots. So the grace is acting logical in a situation that does not always has logic. love is one of the most hardess emotions to content with.
again thank you,
Eddie
PS you know i don't believe in God or grace of the saving type. I believe in self-responsibilty
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Lonnie,
thanks for the read. interesting word. I like it.
hi Eddie
Sounds as if the real question is if love canexist outside the physical level. Only variance I would consider is to rearrange 1st two lines to something like
what good a grave
without death..........of course this might turn this too dark...................stan
Stan,
Grave is a metaphor, because there is no death really. it is the connadations of hugh pain that you wish to be dead emotionally. For me real love is not in the realm of the physical it is sensed in the mind and translated in to an emotional hurt that affects the metaphysical being. I have already gone to far, as you see the explanation eludes everyone, at lease in my perception.
Thanks Stan for the read and thought out comment.
Eddie
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Eduardo, this is not an easy
Eduardo, this is not an easy subject to write about, but you approached it with grace and beauty.
joe
Joe
thanks for the read.
Eddie