Distant Planes Of Dreams(co-write w/Cat in chat)

On many a cold night
My mind will remember
Your soft,smiling eyes
And I cry
To the shadows
For release
From the sadness of
Emotions gone wild
But not forgotten

Your deep, smokey voice
Calls to me
From across the sea

When will we meet
On distant planes
Of joyous expectation
Fulfilling a dream
Of getting lost
Within your sighs

About This Poem

Last Few Words: This was written by Candlewitch and China Blue during Friday nights chat session

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: North Carolina, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allen Poe

Comments

Chrys

i will read this again at leisure to absorb its essence...

I will do the same

Ladies

Somehow this poem seems to be written about one I am praying for at this time. I will revisit ladies and great duet by you both.

Love and Hugs
Mona
xox

Bloody Hell

well done i think this a beautiful, emotional expression of how it feels to long for the one you love.

Lou

Hi

It was fun, we should have another ladies night sans men LOL!!!

Lou

Thanks everyone,

Chrys is equally easy to write with. I had a great time, but next chat I think we should leave the raspberry sauce off the pizza!

Love, Cat

LOL

The sausage didn't help

Lou

Hey Chrys!!!

We are just brilliant together! LOL! It is so good to see you!!!

Love, Cat

Cat

We are, aren't we
thanks
Chrys