Let's pretend away the shadows
and erase away the fears,
we'll find solace in the future
and let the past hold all the tears;
let's pretend for just an instance
empty moments we hadn't shared,
and both of us were interested
because both of us still cared.
Let's pretend we're in the sunshine
sipping cock-tails in the shade,
and neither you, nor I could think of
any place, which we would trade;
Let's pretend we're not pretending
or that we never thought to start;
maybe then, I could recover
from what sits only in, my heart.
Comments
there's really nothing i'd change...
you have a nice rythym going, the theme is directly conveyed and consistent, and i've been through that before!
nice work.
Thanx soo much dear, lovely girl, of the "mo"....
...in keeping things in prospective, it helps to know one's boundaries! I hope you haven't been through my "stuff", before....it would change a lot of the incidentals; if you know what I mean!
I DOO seriously thank you from the bottom of my heart;
sincerely,
doc.